Well, that
title got everyone’s attention real quick, didn’t it?
Allow me to
explain, then feel free to report me...
When it comes to adjectives, one of the
easiest bits of description to drop into writing is colors. I can tell you I’m sitting here right now on
a gray chair wearing a blue shirt and black shorts (there’s a major heat wave
going on in Los Angeles right now) and my tan cat is trying to get my attention.
Now when a
lot of us hit that mid-phase in our growth-as-a-writer arc, we start using
metaphors for everything. My shirt isn’t
blue, it’s sky-colored. My shorts are
the color of coal. My cat, Charlie
Baltimore, is linen-colored. Some folks
get comfortable at this point of the arc and they’re the ones who tend to use
lots and lots of purple prose (color pun not intended, but it works so I’ll go
with it).
The catch,
however, is when people develop the habit of describing everything as
“colored.” Even colors. Which is wrong.
I’ve seen
some folks describe things as red colored, yellow colored, and blue
colored. That’s just silly. And it’s excess words I could cut.
Y’see,
Timmy, colors are inherently “colored.”
If I tell you my shirt is blue, it’s understood that I mean “my shirt is
the color blue.” So I wouldn’t tell you “my
shirt is the color blue colored.”
I should
never use the word colored with colors.
I shouldn’t have blue-colored sky or green-colored grass. They’re already colors—what else could they
be? Blue flavored sky? Green textured grass? Snip that word and have blue sky and green
grass.
I use colored
when I’m making descriptive comparisons.
A girl with strawberry-colored hair can wear a grass-colored dress, for
example. My zombies have chalk-colored
eyes. One draft of Ex-Patriots
had Stealth described as “shadow-colored.”
Use the
Find feature and search through your latest work for uses of the word colored. Make sure it’s being used correctly. Slash it if it isn’t.
Next time I
may be a bit cramped for time, so you’re either going to get a rant about time
bombs or another screenwriter interview (if I’m really up against the wall). But if I do, I’ll make sure it’s a fun
one. Or, at least, highly
controversial.
Until then,
go write.
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